pentool trick is whored beyond reason and the BG is too busy, with no depth because there are no identifiable layers of depth it seems like you are afraid of empty space when you mash all of it together it looks not good and never touch your blur tool ever again
focal is oversharpened just for clarification depth is not making the render look like it is above everything else it is to make the render look like it fits normally dont exagerate depth by overblurring explain this http://planetrenders.net/forums/index.php?showtopic=139840 tag #25. exact same thing minus the blurring
wow kid text needs to be re-done. seems distorted take the text out and the clipping mask thats next to it then make the tag longer to the left so theirs more negative space
stop being retarded kthnxbai looks like an imitation of smudge abstract tags the 10000 C4Ds aren't really working in any way shape or form the reason the smudge tags work so well is because there is negative space in some areas, and the colouring is in the same range this chaotic because of the colour scheme and multiple hard lines