Was that honestly necessary? All I needed was "I don't like it." I'm sorry if my stuff actually has a concept instead of just a render slapped on a brushed background that took 2 steps.
I didn't vote for any, considering they all need a looottt of work. Definitely work on blending your renders instead of just throwing them onto a background with c4ds. Also, don't just throw the text in the corner. I highly recommend doing some tutorials on more advanced effects and c4d usage.
http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s235/Happy_Buddah/headinsandcopy-1.png actually got the idea from the cartoon wars episode of south park . I couldn't help but feel that it looked like Anarchy's style by the time I was done with it xD. It wasn't on purpose, just ended up that way... Haha. C&C!!!!!
The lightning doesn't really fit IMO and something should be done about that negative space on the right. Maybe also fix the lighting. But otherwise it's good .
sillybob what are you talking about? Too many straight lines? Find a straight line in the vector for me that shouldn't be straight. And if you could point out what ways its messy, that would be great. And also, how do you think I could improve it?
People vectored by me http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s235/Happy_Buddah/tehwatermelonsig1.png http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s235/Happy_Buddah/tehwatermelonsig2.png C&C and class if you want .