Ok, I get what you're saying. Looking back on it, I can totally see that I messed up in that way. Everything seems to look different after you've been staring at it for an hour.
I personally like this one, but I guess it's up to you guys to tell me how it looks . http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/6116/wierdkid2bp3.png v2 http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/3285/wierdkid2wu0.png v3 http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4353/wierdkid3in3.png C&C please .
It's very messy. Everything seems to be going everywhere and there is no real flow. It has potential, but it needs a lot of work. Just start doing some tuts and you'll get much better in no time.
Again, just trying new stuff. V1 http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/6190/spritezb0.png V2 http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/4449/sprite2eu1.png V3- second attempt at the effect thingy. http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1094/sprite3pz6.png V4http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/6748/sprite4en6.png In V1 I was trying to make it look like his kick kinda ripped through the back of the sig I guess. I'm not sure how it looks, so I thought I'd just post it without it too.
Let's all just get along . Anyways nice sig man. I love that style and it's very original. Not everything is perfect, but it's good . Keep up the good work.
Ok, I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the feedback. Edit: I attempted to ditch the outlines, but the shapes become much less distinct, so I'd have to mess with the colors and lighting a bit more. Also I tried to add more sceneray, but every attempt I made just seemed to clutter the sig.
I loosely followed a tutorial for some of the features and then put a lot of my own touches on it. I liked what I got so I just decided to post it here. http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/8660/silhouettesigmy5.png