Blahhh

[.MeLo♥]

v1:

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/xdarkstarxx/escapetagsykeversion.png

 

V2:

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/xdarkstarxx/escapetagsykeversionBW.png

 

 

CnC please

[SmokiestGrunl]

I'm not sure what it is, but I'm not liking this one.

 

I don't like the blur over the left side. Try sharpen maybe.

And the pen tool doesn't go right around his body.

[StevenHicks]

I like v1 it look cooler

[Laxmonster54♥]

Right side of v1 is over contrasted and the whole thing is a little monotone, Pen tool is kinda random and I feel like there is a lot of negative space.

7.5/10

[Happy Buddah]

I'm not really liking the pentool. With the background it seems like a lot of the same so there's really no emphasis on the effects closer to the focal. Still good though . Keep it up .

[Xx Anarchy xX♥]

pentool trick is whored beyond reason

 

and the BG is too busy, with no depth because there are no identifiable layers of depth

it seems like you are afraid of empty space

when you mash all of it together it looks not good

 

and never touch your blur tool ever again