All GFX plz try with this render

[D.HeRo♥]

please, CnC, i just jacked around with some settings,

 

all i did was smudge and move around the stock a few times, here is the stock.

 

I would like to see others smudge skills with this stock, no c4ds aloud lol, well i guess i can make an acception lol

 

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o163/dyinghero_27/69.jpg

 

here is my smudge outcome, no c4ds, just alot of moving and erasing lol

 

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o163/dyinghero_27/Powercopy.png

[Chilleh]

Looks like you smudged a bit to much of the render. The eye is the main part of what you want to see or you won't be able to make out the render. Also try getting your text closer to the focal = Better compo.