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ok its kinda dark, because of your color selection. very little depth, the blue stuff on top lowers the depth. the focal doesnt stand out, an oddly enough what seams to be the focal is the guys shoulder or arm pit. sorry man its a bit sloppy, an look kinda like you jsut slapped stuff on there that might have looked good on there own but not together. the lighting an the possible depth behind the blue stuff is ok but its not amazing.

 

i highly recommend looking at some tuts that teach you about the basics such as flow, depth an making your focal more visible. what i mean by that is look at tuts that dont unnecessarily show you step by step how to make a sig, but one that just shows little bits of advice an tips to help the topics that i listed above.

 

dont be discouraged, we need more gfx ppl an even of we didnt you have potential an seam to be interested in the subject. those are enough reasons to keep it up.

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