.dice♥ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Posted June 17, 2008 Here is my first LP. I am looking for things to change on it, but tell me what you think and be honest.and GFX team, tell all users that make sigs what there missing. Don't just say it looks good, or your improving.You need to tell why its good, or in some cases bad. Be Crucial Please. And here is my first LP! http://www.ibotmodz.net/forum/uploads/remoteimages/23873-210.png Modified Version: Better Blended, Tried to make Picking Hand more visible. http://www.ibotmodz.net/forum/uploads/remoteimages/23873-211.png
Laxmonster54♥ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Posted June 17, 2008 Decent idea, just could have been executed better the Light on his hand looks really odd, The bg is strange and doesn't work imo. good use of C4D's but i would mess with the blend mode a little because there a little bright in places. Other then that its not to bad for your first LP good job and keep up the work.
.dice♥ Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Posted June 17, 2008 thanks for the feedback lax. i'll try to do something with that light on his hands.and mess with blending and what not, then release a second version, hopefully better. edit: I'm working on it again, and wow does it ever blend better!
Laxmonster54♥ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Posted June 17, 2008 Can you post That C4d that is on the right side of him please. I want to use that V2 btw is much better good job.
.MeLo♥ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Posted June 17, 2008 V2 is much betterYou have great depth and flow, The c4d is perfect the way it looks like it crawls around his side, the text even fits Great job for first lp
Xx Legacy xX Posted June 17, 2008 Report Posted June 17, 2008 V2 FTW its better better blended and i like the dark color more can i see your c4d's you used?and i love the concept great for your first LP ive never made a LP so i haft to try to make a LP and pen art -Legacy
.dice♥ Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Posted June 17, 2008 Well heres the C4d i used. it has a black background if thats okay lol.Render20.tif
subs_55 Posted June 19, 2008 Report Posted June 19, 2008 nice man i wish i could do that. i love the creativity and abtract effects you used. i dont want to rate because it would be prob too high because im not nearly that good so to me its amazing. keep it up. and in my mind you arnt the weekest link of the GFX team i dont think anyone is. if anything it sould be bigger, WAY bigger but offcourse, its my opinion.
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