I haven't done this in a while..

[Decatur]

So, I haven't done this in a while and this is basically a piece of poop. Pretty monotone, kinda lacking in flow and overpowering in the color red. plan to redo with an actually render later, as apposed to a stock. Give me some legitimate CnC though, not just a x/10 scale. Tell me what you do and do not enjoy about it.

 

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/9075/run18.png

 

 

and that randomly wierd pocket of grey in the corner. idk what that's all about..

 

 

EDIT: I just redid it with another stock and got this result.

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/6969/run19.png

[Lockon]

Is that an alien ?

[Pargy]

I believe it is spiderman.

 

Effects are pretty good and the text is ok, but you put too much shit over the focal, you can barely tell what it is.

 

 

...also, the lens flares suck.

[Decatur]

tried a new stock,

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/6969/run19.png

 

It's not a lens flare, it's erasing a circle with a soft brush.

 

ALSO, Like half way through I couldn't apply image anymore? wtf.

[Pargy]

Better...but i still dont like the circle thingies.

[jmdalmighty]

Is that pikachu by the clown?

[Decatur]

bamp

[gruntmods]

Is that pikachu by the clown?

Its like tripping on acid.

[Curtis]

I think its pretty good, i like how sharp the focal is

[Decatur]

I think its pretty good, i like how sharp the focal is

 

in which one?

[.MeLo♥]

10/10...

 

LOL JK

 

Dude second stock is so bad ass. I love it <3

[Decatur]

10/10...

 

LOL JK

 

Dude second stock is so bad ass. I love it <3

 

I need some critisism! tell me what you like about it and what you don't! I can't ******* learn when it's 10/10. epic/10 12/10. shit like that!

[iBotPeaches]

no flow, sorry.

[Decatur]

no flow, sorry.