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    #1 Dan

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 11:50 AM

    Hey i was messing around and i made this, i think it's pretty good. Obv i need to add more, but what?
    any suggestions?
    Also CnC.

    It will be edited to your suggestions.

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    V3
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    V4
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    Thanks.

    Edited by xDansomee♥, 29 August 2008 - 12:44 PM.


    #2 sillybob123

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 11:59 AM

    Sorry i dont like the overall peice although i can see you have been looking at other peoples work and have tried to incorporate some new techniques, some of the things i dont like are the sharpness of the edge on the focal "blade" across the middle although i like your choice of colors IMO your best :D

    #3 Dan

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 12:05 PM

    Sorry i dont like the overall peice although i can see you have been looking at other peoples work and have tried to incorporate some new techniques, some of the things i dont like are the sharpness of the edge on the focal "blade" across the middle although i like your choice of colors IMO your best :D



    No, No, No Joseph

    I made this in June lol.

    I was looking through some of my old stuff and decided to post it.

    Well i did change one thing today, the border was grey now its black.

    Meow. lol

    P.S if you dont believe me ill post a screenie of the properties :)

    EDIT: Proof mwhahaha.

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    Edited by xDansomee♥, 28 August 2008 - 12:13 PM.


    #4 sillybob123

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 12:29 PM

    So you have got worse since june? and if this is the start of something good if u did this before other peices?

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 01:08 PM

    joe dont be mean and i think its ok add some text and mabey a pic of something

    #6 sillybob123

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 01:13 PM

    XD i wasnt trying to be lol

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 01:13 PM

    So you have got worse since june? and if this is the start of something good if u did this before other peices?


    No, Idiot lol.

    This is the last thing i've made since june,,,

    Nd Mr Slidell

    I did say i only done the background and then got stuck.

    I'm looking for other things to do with it :)

    Thanks for the feedback anyway.



    EDIT: Joe is a big bully rofl.

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    Edited by xDansomee♥, 28 August 2008 - 01:14 PM.


    #8 Jimmyg1995

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 03:35 PM

    what is it???

    #9 sillybob123

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 04:13 PM

    Please learn to read a post fully and correctly if you had read it correctly you would see it is a background and he is stuck for ideas on focals even so not all sigs need to actually portrait something simplicity is a virtue!

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 06:00 PM

    Well its not pro, but its not horrible. I would like to see more like your Panda sig.

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 06:02 PM

    Well its not pro, but its not horrible. I would like to see more like your Panda sig.


    The panda was made by lax if u look closely u can see laxmonster productions :)

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    Posted 28 August 2008 - 07:39 PM

    The panda was made by lax if u look closely u can see laxmonster productions :)


    oh lol. Well in that case you need to read some more tutorials.

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    Posted 29 August 2008 - 11:21 AM

    Thanks for the feedback,,,

    Yeah Lax did make the sig.

    I'm not using Photoshop and all of the tutorials for Paint.net suck lol.

    Although i want to get Photoshop pretty soon :)

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    Posted 29 August 2008 - 12:35 PM

    Im not fond of V3 the lines are too bold and draw your attention to much try lowering the opacity maybe 10% ish although if you were to eventually place a render be sure to have it On top of the lines not beneath :)

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    Posted 29 August 2008 - 12:49 PM

    :D :D :D i much prefer V4 we got there in the end lol