iBotModz CBox
my newest work, GFX team show me what you think
#1
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:08 PM
C&C
ignore the white corners and edges they are supost to be transparent
EDIT: i fixed the white edges so its all good
#2
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:16 PM
I really like this one. (even tho i hate anmie)
Things i like:
Colors
Flow
Depth
Things that could be better:
All above could be improved.
7/10.
#3
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:26 PM
#4
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:29 PM
If you want to save it so it shows transperancy, do .png
.Png also saves it so its much more clearer.
The smudging is ok, overlaps her fingers and makes them look distorted
When you smudge, smudge in one particular direction as to create flow, not just all over the place random.
That thing next to her head is kinda wierd and doesnt fit
(Idk if thats part of the render or c4d)
But you are improving, keep it up buddy
#5
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:31 PM
I'm Opinionated. I'm getting - reped for it. I guess i can back my self up and you guys can't
Oh and Melo. If he saved it as a .png we wouldn't be able to see it.
Jpg all of us can see..
#6
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:34 PM
Nice colors, they match her well
If you want to save it so it shows transperancy, do .png
.Png also saves it so its much more clearer.
The smudging is ok, overlaps her fingers and makes them look distorted
When you smudge, smudge in one particular direction as to create flow, not just all over the place random.
That thing next to her head is kinda wierd and doesnt fit
(Idk if thats part of the render or c4d)
But you are improving, keep it up buddy
wow i just notice how bad that thing is, its part of the render. i know what you mean baout the smudging but i wanted to create more of a rough thing going on instend of a simple minded straing line. the smudging wasnt random. and id like to know if its better the the gow one? i need to know if im going in the right direction.
#7
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:45 PM
Yeah man no problem.
I'm Opinionated. I'm getting - reped for it. I guess i can back my self up and you guys can't
Oh and Melo. If he saved it as a .png we wouldn't be able to see it.
Jpg all of us can see..
What are you talking about
everyone can see .png
Id say its as good as your gow one subs, at least your not going downhill, practice man!!! Your not going to get anarchy skills in a few days,
ive been doing it for years and im still nub
#8
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:54 PM
Yeah man no problem.
I'm Opinionated. I'm getting - reped for it. I guess i can back my self up and you guys can't
Oh and Melo. If he saved it as a .png we wouldn't be able to see it.
Jpg all of us can see..
What are you talking about
everyone can see .png
Id say its as good as your gow one subs, at least your not going downhill, practice man!!! Your not going to get anarchy skills in a few days,
ive been doing it for years and im still nub
im well aware that im not going to get amazing over night, but ya know what, that doesnt mean im not going to try damn it. if i can just get that little bit better by asking a question, im guna ask that question. you are also not aware of how much i have done you guys have only seen about 40% of my stuff. i have been testing and practicing and experementing in pretty much all of my free time. its final exams week at my school so its an accomplishment that im doing anything, let alone getting better. dont think im giving up, cuz if you do, your wrong. its just a matter of time before youll accept me into the GFX team. and then who knows what will happen from there.
#9
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:56 PM
im glad
im hoping to one day accept you into the gfx team
KIUKIUKIU
#10
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:57 PM
Hickmanlax54-For Aim
InvisionGFX@hotmail.com-For MSN
I will teach you my ways. I like helping people
#11
Posted 18 June 2008 - 08:58 PM
#12
Posted 18 June 2008 - 09:00 PM
will do man, my msn is funkey_monkey_55@hotmail.com, i can be on for a bit now so... yaSubs do you have Aim Or MSN messenger? If so add me.
Hickmanlax54-For Aim
InvisionGFX@hotmail.com-For MSN
I will teach you my ways. I like helping people
I like it, and i think that the object next to her head is like a jem or something she's trying to catch, but idk.
the thing is a jem on a necklace i just didnt notice for some reason an neglected to smudge, blur yata yata.
#13
Posted 18 June 2008 - 09:03 PM
will do man, my msn is funkey_monkey_55@hotmail.com, i can be on for a bit now so... yaSubs do you have Aim Or MSN messenger? If so add me.
Hickmanlax54-For Aim
InvisionGFX@hotmail.com-For MSN
I will teach you my ways. I like helping people
I wont be able to get on until like 11 or so. Or we could just wait until tomorrow
#14
Posted 18 June 2008 - 09:11 PM
will do man, my msn is funkey_monkey_55@hotmail.com, i can be on for a bit now so... yaSubs do you have Aim Or MSN messenger? If so add me.
Hickmanlax54-For Aim
InvisionGFX@hotmail.com-For MSN
I will teach you my ways. I like helping people
I wont be able to get on until like 11 or so. Or we could just wait until tomorrow
ok i should be on later tomorow, not late but like 5/6 ish to 9:30, maybe eariler or later hard to tell
#15
Posted 18 June 2008 - 09:22 PM
lax i added ur msn as well if thats ok. if not well then just decline.
brad_larsen_33@hotmail.com
#16
Posted 19 June 2008 - 12:47 PM
#17
Posted 19 June 2008 - 02:38 PM
#18
Posted 19 June 2008 - 02:41 PM
Yeah man no problem.
I'm Opinionated. I'm getting - reped for it. I guess i can back my self up and you guys can't
Oh and Melo. If he saved it as a .png we wouldn't be able to see it.
Jpg all of us can see..
What are you talking about
everyone can see .png
Id say its as good as your gow one subs, at least your not going downhill, practice man!!! Your not going to get anarchy skills in a few days,
ive been doing it for years and im still nub
Haha whoops. Meant .psd.
Nvm its k.
#19
Posted 19 June 2008 - 05:39 PM
#20
Posted 19 June 2008 - 10:54 PM
haha double post much. and yeh i was wondering why .png
You telling me about my double post is just about as bad as double posting lol.
And a .png file alows transparency and ect...
That's why renders are .png.
Border looks fine tho.