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    #1 Decatur

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    Posted 29 June 2010 - 11:27 PM

    So, I haven't done this in a while and this is basically a piece of poop. Pretty monotone, kinda lacking in flow and overpowering in the color red. plan to redo with an actually render later, as apposed to a stock. Give me some legitimate CnC though, not just a x/10 scale. Tell me what you do and do not enjoy about it.

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    and that randomly wierd pocket of grey in the corner. idk what that's all about..


    EDIT: I just redid it with another stock and got this result.
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    #2 Lockon

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    Posted 30 June 2010 - 04:11 PM

    Is that an alien ?

    #3 Pargy

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    Posted 30 June 2010 - 04:16 PM

    I believe it is spiderman.

    Effects are pretty good and the text is ok, but you put too much shit over the focal, you can barely tell what it is.


    ...also, the lens flares suck.

    #4 Decatur

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    Posted 30 June 2010 - 05:51 PM

    tried a new stock,
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    It's not a lens flare, it's erasing a circle with a soft brush.

    ALSO, Like half way through I couldn't apply image anymore? wtf.

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    Posted 30 June 2010 - 08:45 PM

    Better...but i still dont like the circle thingies.

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    Posted 30 June 2010 - 08:57 PM

    Is that pikachu by the clown?

    #7 Decatur

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    Posted 01 July 2010 - 10:20 PM

    bamp

    #8 gruntmods

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    Posted 04 July 2010 - 05:48 AM

    Is that pikachu by the clown?

    Its like tripping on acid.

    #9 Curtis

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    Posted 11 July 2010 - 07:08 PM

    I think its pretty good, i like how sharp the focal is

    #10 Decatur

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    Posted 11 July 2010 - 10:43 PM

    I think its pretty good, i like how sharp the focal is


    in which one?

    #11 .MeLo♥

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    Posted 15 July 2010 - 10:31 PM

    10/10...

    LOL JK

    Dude second stock is so bad ass. I love it <3

    #12 Decatur

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    Posted 15 July 2010 - 11:39 PM

    10/10...

    LOL JK

    Dude second stock is so bad ass. I love it <3


    I need some critisism! tell me what you like about it and what you don't! I can't fucking learn when it's 10/10. epic/10 12/10. shit like that!

    #13 iBotPeaches

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    Posted 17 July 2010 - 08:14 AM

    no flow, sorry.

    #14 Decatur

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    Posted 17 July 2010 - 10:46 AM

    no flow, sorry.


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