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    #1 iGo By FadE

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    Posted 04 July 2009 - 01:15 PM

    Hey yall, I would like some CnC on a work in progress I am working on. Note: This is before any filters/grads/C4D's. I just feel like taking a break, so judge my work. Just remember, it's a WiP!

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    it's called "I Am a Monster"

    EDIT: Main render: http://planetrenders....php?pos=-46717

    Edited by iGo By FadE, 04 July 2009 - 01:17 PM.


    #2 SmokiestGrunl

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    Posted 04 July 2009 - 09:53 PM

    Looks good.

    It took a while for me to notice the people blended into the bg.

    Looking forward to the finished product.

    #3 iGo By FadE

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    Posted 04 July 2009 - 10:09 PM

    Yeah, they are just other "forms" of alex. One is muscle mass, and the other is his "blade arm"

    #4 Curtis

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    Posted 05 July 2009 - 02:10 PM

    not good, very poor sense of lighting

    very strange texture and flow, or none at all,

    why is the focal on the far letf? looks like and empty hole.

    Edited by Fatal Error, 05 July 2009 - 05:28 PM.


    #5 .MeLo♥

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    Posted 05 July 2009 - 03:23 PM

    Its a good WIP,
    just needs some depth and some color contrast,
    try burning and dodging some places up

    #6 Curtis

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    Posted 05 July 2009 - 06:32 PM

    Dude, he said it's a WiP. You need to chill out on your CnC.


    lul coming frum you.

    and no i'm not, he doesn't get any better if i say "great job", im gonna give him information.