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    #1 michael iz pro

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    Posted 21 June 2009 - 02:57 PM

    this is a tiny bit of our montage i thought ill just add all the ordinary clipz and by the way 90% of the shotz were no scopez give me until saturday and ill have all the filmz together in 1 montage ill send the link to the finished 1 after

    Beta Build 0001 Montage Beta Build 0001 Test

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eO2Zl8QrF_4

    if you liked the beta plz post here or on youtube

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    #2 iBotPeaches

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    Posted 21 June 2009 - 05:09 PM

    Its definitely not good at all, if you want me to be honest. Compared to other montages it lacks. A couple no scopes here and there, but otherwise sometimes you miss 8 shots in a row. If anything edit those out just to the headshot (Thats what the real guys do)

    The music I liked, just not in sync with your kills.

    #3 matty0

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    Posted 22 June 2009 - 02:28 AM

    i have 4 suggestions for you that will make the final product much better
    1) you're clearly capturing in widescreen but you've rendered the video in full screen (capturing in 16:9, exporting 4:3) so everything looks squashed togeather and weird. so either film and edit in full screen (i assume you use a dazzle of some sort, just go to capture preferences and change it) or export in widescreen and upload that to youtube.
    2) make the cuts quicker or add transitions. just freezing for a seccond and then moving to the next looks unproffesional, an if you have a montage up you want it to look unbelievable. just chop it off so either you're still walking at least or if you're feeling dangerous, you could take a scoped view with your sniper and fade from one clip to the next. as the frame of the croshairs stays the same the fade looks pretty cool.
    3) cut your scenes! in some of them you have like 10 secconds of nothing happening before you kill somebody else... you want it to be short and snappy. so cut out all the boring bits in between action.
    4) use more appropriate music... that just diddnt fit at all

    #4 REDSTAR 105

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    Posted 22 June 2009 - 04:41 AM

    You need better clips, a better fitting song, and some editing put in there, at least transitions!

    #5 michael iz pro

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    Posted 22 June 2009 - 09:46 AM

    thankx 4 da negative and positive out puts i know this definietly aint the end of the montage and those were some of my clips i just rendered i know the finished montage is going to be better because im doing most of it in sony vegas pro hd i never edited that video at all because its da beta AND them people who do just really show how shit they are and none of this was social slayer either peoplpe who save clipz 4rm social have no experienced in ranked this montage wud be alot better if i had some of your no scopez and multi killz em@il me at kid-hitman@hotmail.co.uk or MSN and b4 i release the end of it on youtube ill let you guys see it first so u can edit it for me

    the music is that because my second best friend died in January 17th 2009 he also played halo 3 as a purple spartan as yuo know his name was kane but in the finished tage ill put some heavy tunez promise

    #6 michael iz pro

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    Posted 22 June 2009 - 09:49 AM

    but you got to admit the last no scope was insane lol and ibot peaches wow u most of only been watching how much shotz i missed altogether lol

    #7 Decatur

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    Posted 22 June 2009 - 09:59 AM

    welp the music was appropriate cause you were missing 90% of the time.

    #8 ImaGonnaGetYou

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    Posted 22 June 2009 - 07:05 PM

    I don't know what's worse, throwing up, or watching this montage.

    I only got halfway through and I had a headache.

    1. Get, you know, fitting music.
    2. Edit out the parts where it's blatantly obvious that you suck at no-scoping
    3. Stop using z's in every word of every sentence, because it makes me think you're a two year old.

    #9 XeNoS

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    Posted 26 June 2009 - 06:48 AM

    3/10

    #10 Lockon

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    Posted 26 June 2009 - 08:27 AM

    Nice music! it fits the video and the kills were mlg

    #11 360

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    Posted 28 June 2009 - 02:08 PM

    Pretty Good

    #12 Keegan

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    Posted 30 June 2009 - 09:55 PM

    1/9,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999.

    #13 michael iz pro

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    Posted 12 July 2009 - 08:11 AM

    Beta Build 0002
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