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    #1 SpanishGamer911

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    Posted 20 March 2009 - 11:05 AM

    i made this one a couple of days ago ^_^ not my best but oh well


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    #2 iKhaosmaster

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    Posted 20 March 2009 - 04:40 PM

    Try to keep only one render on the tag.

    #3 SmokiestGrunl

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    Posted 20 March 2009 - 05:25 PM

    Not bad, I like the back ground effects, but the big render doesn't blend in well.

    It looks like novice work at the moment so keep practicing.

    #4 Random1225

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    Posted 20 March 2009 - 07:30 PM

    Looks pretty good. You might need to blend the big render more like smokie says, but otherwise it's pretty good.

    #5 Happy Buddah

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    Posted 21 March 2009 - 09:26 AM

    Random c4ds and border look terrible

    #6 Legerci

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    Posted 21 March 2009 - 03:02 PM

    try to make it down to one focal. Maybe just read some tutorials just to see what good effects you could do. You don't haft to do that tutorial just read it.